Sweet sailor

Similarly to your other shots this one really has that vintage look, this shot could have had a little bit more punch to the contrast in some areas (stronger reds, highlights to the hair, and eyes), this could be accomplished with some masking or by tweaking the light setup ever so slightly as to give more punch to the reflection in the hair and bring out the eyes even more (the right eye gets slightly too dark). The added contrast would also help bringing your subject more out of the background. This crop is a tough one, you want to get as close to the face as possible, whilst still getting that dress room in the shot. This is one of those shots where I would do different crops and set them side by side and look at them to see which I preferred.